Not a big fan of MC calling Susan by her name now... that really ruins the kink.
Actually that goes for Cindy too...
The M/S and A/N dynamic is quintessential for this kink and without it it's just two people that haven't seen each other in a long time fucking. The B/S dynamic is different though it doesn't hurt to have a few e. g. "big brother" or "little sister" in it.
Apart from that not bad a game... even though I know where you got your inspiration from.
Sorry Dragon. The addition of the replay gallery buggered up the previous saves, so to have an error-free experience best to start from the beginning and skip through if you have to. Bear in mind there are some SFX in some scenes though.
Sadly the addition of the replay gallery mucked up the previous saves. Apologies for that. Maybe begin again from the start and skip certain parts to get back to where you were.
Give it a try! (my opinion about game) Pros +Good main character +Good start with plot story +Good harem visual novel game Cons -Lack of choices to be gf with the girl u like / no ''peek'' ''dont peek'' choices -Unrealistic concidience with Kylie -Incest (because of there is no choice u cant reject or accept incest concept)
Downloaded the 0.6 hotfix this morning (uk) and restarted from my last 0.5 save.
Unfortunaly when I get to the new first lewd sense in 0.6 with kylie, I get grey screen with 'An Exception has Occurred while running game code: File game/script.rpy, line 9279 in script"
When I Click Ignore, I get quite a few of them with different Lines codes mentioned.
This is a good VN and looking forward to future updates and content, keep up the good work!
new game update 0.6 has a lot of errors from thel last scene of 0.5 to the last scene of 0.6 i could hardly play the new update i was always getting errors in the people talking and sex scenes.
I found a simple quick fix for the errors, start a new game, select the MC's name again and do a fast forward (skip) through all the old parts, when you get into the new everything will work fine except the name doesn't seem to show in the dialog box, but you get to see everything, something in the update loses the name so it errors out everytime the MC talks or is refered to, the trace back always shows file "game/script.rpy", line (any number), in script player_name "any dialog"... After using ignore several times and reading the dialog, I noticed that and simply did a fresh start and skipped to the new content in a few minutes. Oh and great game, a bit too close to Killer 7's one but still a good play, keep up the good work ;)
Don't know why. I used to be able to d/l from them, but suddenly I get an error report of "connection refused by MegaNZ" whenever I try, from all devs, of all kinds/genres. Thank you for putting them on Google Drive. Looking forward to updates.
Still working on renders for now. Going to take some time though as I'm waiting on surgery for acute pain that's preventing me from working quicker. Should be better after next week. Thank you very much for your support. I'll keep you posted.
Thanks for the offer, mate. I'm in good hands at the moment. Got some great pain management at the moment to tie me over till the surgery next Thursday, after which they'll fix what hasn't healed from the previous rectal surgery.
this game is a gem amongs many others, i look forward to supporting you in the future, may i ask do you have a patreon or some other way for us to support you ?
Thanks for your support mate. I decided not to have a patreon as this is purely a passion project of mine. If you do feel a need to contribute, a simple donation or server boost in Discord will suffice. Once again thanks for your support.
I agree with a poster below. Would have appreciated not seeing the mc face. the mc face being visable or their whole person tends to take away from the immersion. my only real critique. otherwise, i enjoyed the game.
Thanks for the feedback Rocky. I simply wanted to go in a different direction with the MC being shown. There's more content being developed so hopefully should have it ready for you by early January
I just finished v0.5 and I'd like to give a personal feedback; no criticisms, just opinions and wishes.
Firstly, I undestand the similarity with MNF, unfortunately even with the same 'jap' characters' graphic; I would avoid to show MC ugly face if possible.
Second, more important; personally I'l really like to have intercourses among the women/girls. Having 4 hot ladies in the same bed should lead to some actions among them, and this also for Susan-Liz-Marion (as it happens in MNF), maybe even with the Grandmother (I don't recall the name now). Some (inxest) lesbianism is wellcome.
Third: please do no expand to much the NCPs; this will confuse and disperse the story. You already have 7 women, at least, to play with.
Four: since I am a watersport lover, I'd love to see some content with this fetish; MNF has a real minimunm (too little unfortunately) content,
One last think about the plot: I do not understand Marion generosity in giving such a big and nice house to Liz (which is the relationship with Marion?) instead of give that to Susan that have now 4 other people to host.
Said all this, thanks for your commitment and my very best wishes for the next future
Thanks for your feedback. I included MC's face to add more depth to the experience. MNF was the main inspiration for this. That's why the story's similar. There will be interactions between the girls later on while MC's busy. Haven't planned much after that at this point, but I will take your advice and keep it in mind. I'm personally not a big fan of watersports (golden showers), but I reckon I'll be able to include some form of female ejaculation at some point.
As far as Marion is concerned, the reason for her generosity is due to a connection she has between her & Susan that both Susan & MC haven't discovered yet. More to come on that.
I just found this gem of a visual novel and it is awesome. Above my expectations and I would say excellent work. I hope you get well and continue to shower us with your excellence. Thanks for all your hard work. :)
No timetable at this stage due to failing health. At this point working on synopsis for 0.6 so trying to get more content out as soon as I possibly can.
Already liking this one better than MNF, and would be more interested to see where this one goes.
Beth needs a lot of polishing. She is literally non-existant after her introduction outside of token appearances in the background from where she has no further input or dialogue up until she is basically handed to the MC. She is effectively overlooked for a significant portion of the game.
There are also several mismatched names, Beth will sometimes be referred to as Bree and Kirsty sometimes will be referenced as Kylie.
I started up the 0.5 update with a new game and it displays the wrong pictures/characters for the mom and stuff in the opening in the game before you me the lady at the trainstatio
Do you know "My New Family" created by Killer7? Cause the more i play (or read cause no choices), the more see this as plagiarism. 90%+ are stuff i saw while playing MNF.
Yes, MNF gave me inspiration for the VN as the start of the story drew similarities with my own experiences as an adoptee. Not to take anything away from Killer7's efforts. I wanted to put my own spin on it, but have the character interactions and their relationships evolve differently. But the main aim here is not to drag the story out too much and to avoid unnecessary repetiveness with certain content. After all, we're all after a feel-good story from time to time to keep our spirits up, especially after what's been going on globally the past 2 yrs.
Please accept this hug off Kylie as a thankyou for your support.
The fact you don't give player an option to refuse sex scenes is a big minus, I would have rather decline Marion. Few times both Marion and MC refers Susan as landlady instead of mother, which isn't bid deal, just need proofreading I guess. Also I really doubt that Kylie would open up to MC about her issues first day they meet, prob would have better to let her open up bit by bit over time while getting closer.
All in all not a bad experience, could be better but could have been a lot worse too so keep on rolling =).
Also it was bit confusing with chapter labels, this has 3 chapters since the prologue is labeled as chapter 1.
Thanks for the feedback. I will take that all on board. All typos have already been fixed, and there will be decisions added in later on. We're still early WIP. Oh, and Kylie's story will be going further in depth. Just getting some simple facts cleared up first.
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just needs prego content
I love this game and the story is interesting and am eagerly waiting for the next update.
I also highly recommend it
Thanks man. I appreciate it
I love this game it has a interesting story and the creator is awesome
I highly recommend it
Thanks Chip. Much apprectiated.
I must say I found this to actually be better than MNF.
Thanks, I appreciate it.
Not a big fan of MC calling Susan by her name now... that really ruins the kink.
Actually that goes for Cindy too...
The M/S and A/N dynamic is quintessential for this kink and without it it's just two people that haven't seen each other in a long time fucking. The B/S dynamic is different though it doesn't hurt to have a few e. g. "big brother" or "little sister" in it.
Apart from that not bad a game... even though I know where you got your inspiration from.
Don't fret, the Mommy Ginger and Aunty phrases will be used a lot more, not to mention the B/S as well.
Good to hear... will you change the old dialogue too or only the new one?
It will be the new dialogue. Mommy Ginger's been mentioned a few times already. Lots more of that to come.
So i have to edit the script myself... oh well...
EDIT: I removed all references to MC calling his mother and grandma by their fist name. Even them asking MC to do so.
Now the game is an incest game again.
If anyone wants the edited script.rpy file just DM me...
Kinda sad that the dev won't change it or better yet implemented that in the fist place... oh well...
love the update. just wish it didnt have so many errors
Sorry Dragon. The addition of the replay gallery buggered up the previous saves, so to have an error-free experience best to start from the beginning and skip through if you have to. Bear in mind there are some SFX in some scenes though.
Suggestion: Are there any plans to add a chapter select feature?
This would be beneficial both for new releases to keep from having to do a full restart, and for replay to start at specific points in the game.
Hadn't thought about it but I'll keep it in mind.
I don't mind replaying it since it's been a while that I played it, whenever 0.5 was released.
Going back through it I found this error, should be Beth and not Bree.
Thanks. I'll nite that diwn.
First off, love it, great story, 2nd, what is the music you used in this, especially love the soft piano pieces.
I used royalty-free music from various sources. Glad to see you're enjoying it. Thanks for the support.
Great stuff, but I've encountered some errors. It's having callback problems to the players name during the time with Marion in her office.
Sadly the addition of the replay gallery mucked up the previous saves. Apologies for that. Maybe begin again from the start and skip certain parts to get back to where you were.
Have to say i like you game very much i'm excited for the new update, your game reminds me of another game i play call My New Family.
Thanks. My New Family was the inspiration for this. I've already given credit to the author regarding this.
Give it a try! (my opinion about game)
Pros
+Good main character
+Good start with plot story
+Good harem visual novel game
Cons
-Lack of choices to be gf with the girl u like / no ''peek'' ''dont peek'' choices
-Unrealistic concidience with Kylie
-Incest (because of there is no choice u cant reject or accept incest concept)
yea the same happen to me. just hope we do not have to wait to long for the hotfix
Downloaded the 0.6 hotfix this morning (uk) and restarted from my last 0.5 save.
Unfortunaly when I get to the new first lewd sense in 0.6 with kylie, I get grey screen with 'An Exception has Occurred while running game code: File game/script.rpy, line 9279 in script"
When I Click Ignore, I get quite a few of them with different Lines codes mentioned.
This is a good VN and looking forward to future updates and content, keep up the good work!
Try and play from the beginning as we've experienced issues with the implementation of the replay gallery and SFX. Sorry for the inconvenience.
Don't be sorry, it'll be worth the replay.
Thank you for the reply! and good luck!
Thanks
new game update 0.6 has a lot of errors from thel last scene of 0.5 to the last scene of 0.6 i could hardly play the new update i was always getting errors in the people talking and sex scenes.
I've been made aware, thanks. I should be home in a few hours then I should be able to fix and reupload.
I found a simple quick fix for the errors, start a new game, select the MC's name again and do a fast forward (skip) through all the old parts, when you get into the new everything will work fine except the name doesn't seem to show in the dialog box, but you get to see everything, something in the update loses the name so it errors out everytime the MC talks or is refered to, the trace back always shows file "game/script.rpy", line (any number), in script player_name "any dialog"... After using ignore several times and reading the dialog, I noticed that and simply did a fresh start and skipped to the new content in a few minutes. Oh and great game, a bit too close to Killer 7's one but still a good play, keep up the good work ;)
My fellow dev has been working on that issue while I'm at work and dhould be right go later tonight once I get home
Any updates on 0.6 progress?
I'm currently rendering 2nd last ingame day of 0.6. Trying my best to finish the update ASAP.
Update 0.6??
I'm working on it. Real life issues provided some hurdles but probs a month away roughly at this point. Sorry about taking so long.
Do you have another download site? MegaNZ refuses to connect for downloads. Not just yours, everyone's.
When did this happen? I'll check the links. If they have stopped it, I'll switch to a different provider.
Has been happening for about 2-3 months, all links from all devs who use MegaNZ.
Thanks. I'll switch to Google Drive.
Thank You. Downloaded fine.
Probably only happening on your end. I downloaded a game from Mega just fine the other day.
Don't know why. I used to be able to d/l from them, but suddenly I get an error report of "connection refused by MegaNZ" whenever I try, from all devs, of all kinds/genres. Thank you for putting them on Google Drive. Looking forward to updates.
Hope you and yours are safe and enjoying these holidays.
🎄🎉
We are thank you. Same goes to you as well. Happy Holidays.
Give us a date please waiting for the update really badly..
Still working on renders for now. Going to take some time though as I'm waiting on surgery for acute pain that's preventing me from working quicker. Should be better after next week. Thank you very much for your support. I'll keep you posted.
Thanks for the offer, mate. I'm in good hands at the moment. Got some great pain management at the moment to tie me over till the surgery next Thursday, after which they'll fix what hasn't healed from the previous rectal surgery.
Best wishes for you❤️
One of the best story line..❤️❤️❤️ add more women and harem please
Can't wait for the next update please add more content and release it soon..
this game is a gem amongs many others, i look forward to supporting you in the future, may i ask do you have a patreon or some other way for us to support you ?
Thanks for your support mate. I decided not to have a patreon as this is purely a passion project of mine. If you do feel a need to contribute, a simple donation or server boost in Discord will suffice. Once again thanks for your support.
I agree with a poster below. Would have appreciated not seeing the mc face. the mc face being visable or their whole person tends to take away from the immersion. my only real critique. otherwise, i enjoyed the game.
Thanks for the feedback Rocky. I simply wanted to go in a different direction with the MC being shown. There's more content being developed so hopefully should have it ready for you by early January
I just finished v0.5 and I'd like to give a personal feedback; no criticisms, just opinions and wishes.
Firstly, I undestand the similarity with MNF, unfortunately even with the same 'jap' characters' graphic; I would avoid to show MC ugly face if possible.
Second, more important; personally I'l really like to have intercourses among the women/girls. Having 4 hot ladies in the same bed should lead to some actions among them, and this also for Susan-Liz-Marion (as it happens in MNF), maybe even with the Grandmother (I don't recall the name now). Some (inxest) lesbianism is wellcome.
Third: please do no expand to much the NCPs; this will confuse and disperse the story. You already have 7 women, at least, to play with.
Four: since I am a watersport lover, I'd love to see some content with this fetish; MNF has a real minimunm (too little unfortunately) content,
One last think about the plot: I do not understand Marion generosity in giving such a big and nice house to Liz (which is the relationship with Marion?) instead of give that to Susan that have now 4 other people to host.
Said all this, thanks for your commitment and my very best wishes for the next future
Thanks for your feedback. I included MC's face to add more depth to the experience. MNF was the main inspiration for this. That's why the story's similar. There will be interactions between the girls later on while MC's busy. Haven't planned much after that at this point, but I will take your advice and keep it in mind. I'm personally not a big fan of watersports (golden showers), but I reckon I'll be able to include some form of female ejaculation at some point.
As far as Marion is concerned, the reason for her generosity is due to a connection she has between her & Susan that both Susan & MC haven't discovered yet. More to come on that.
Once again, thank you for your support. Cheers.
I just found this gem of a visual novel and it is awesome. Above my expectations and I would say excellent work. I hope you get well and continue to shower us with your excellence. Thanks for all your hard work. :)
Thanks for your kind words Stormthump. I will endeavour to keep producing more of this fine content for you to enjoy.
Looking Forward to 0.6 any timetable planned or does it come out when ready?
No timetable at this stage due to failing health. At this point working on synopsis for 0.6 so trying to get more content out as soon as I possibly can.
Ok get well First game development is second hand love the game FYI
Thank you.
please don't put ntr content it would spoil the game
No NTR planned at all. Don't worry
Already liking this one better than MNF, and would be more interested to see where this one goes.
Beth needs a lot of polishing. She is literally non-existant after her introduction outside of token appearances in the background from where she has no further input or dialogue up until she is basically handed to the MC. She is effectively overlooked for a significant portion of the game.
There are also several mismatched names, Beth will sometimes be referred to as Bree and Kirsty sometimes will be referenced as Kylie.
Beth will have more content incoming, I can assure you. As far as those errors you mentioned are concerned, they have already been addressed.
I thank you for your feedback and support, and look forward to bringing you more exciting content.
I started up the 0.5 update with a new game and it displays the wrong pictures/characters for the mom and stuff in the opening in the game before you me the lady at the trainstatio
The "younger" pic of Mom is how MC remembers her before the car crash. I decided to change it to add realism to the story.
that makes sense. I was super confused. Thanks for the clarification.
You're most welcome. Hope you enjoy the content, there's more to come...
Do you know "My New Family" created by Killer7? Cause the more i play (or read cause no choices), the more see this as plagiarism. 90%+ are stuff i saw while playing MNF.
My New Family was the main inspiration for this. I merely wanted to put my own spin on what's a fantastic story by Killer7. No plaguerism intended.
Do you have a patreon
Don't have one as I'm not that desperate for funding. Just happy to produce something for everyone to enjoy
When i start the game on joiplay is show me multiple scripts error
Can we have a roommate-patch? I want to be able to contract a stray cat!
Sorry to disappoint. No 'little cats' to be found here..
What are all the fetish tags planned? Will it have pregnancy (cross fingers)?
Looking at it. Just thinking about where to put it in the timeline.
So, basically your take on "My New Family" by Killer7?
Yes, MNF gave me inspiration for the VN as the start of the story drew similarities with my own experiences as an adoptee. Not to take anything away from Killer7's efforts. I wanted to put my own spin on it, but have the character interactions and their relationships evolve differently. But the main aim here is not to drag the story out too much and to avoid unnecessary repetiveness with certain content. After all, we're all after a feel-good story from time to time to keep our spirits up, especially after what's been going on globally the past 2 yrs.
Please accept this hug off Kylie as a thankyou for your support.
The fact you don't give player an option to refuse sex scenes is a big minus, I would have rather decline Marion. Few times both Marion and MC refers Susan as landlady instead of mother, which isn't bid deal, just need proofreading I guess. Also I really doubt that Kylie would open up to MC about her issues first day they meet, prob would have better to let her open up bit by bit over time while getting closer.
All in all not a bad experience, could be better but could have been a lot worse too so keep on rolling =).
Also it was bit confusing with chapter labels, this has 3 chapters since the prologue is labeled as chapter 1.
Thanks for the feedback. I will take that all on board. All typos have already been fixed, and there will be decisions added in later on. We're still early WIP. Oh, and Kylie's story will be going further in depth. Just getting some simple facts cleared up first.
on my phone it keeps crashing every few minutes it might just be my phone but thought u would like to know
Thanks for the feedback. Images may need to be compressed. Will look into it.
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is there plans for a android version
There are. Tried to port to Android with 0.1 but was unable to for some reason. Will try again with 0.2 only being a day away or so.
oh ok thats awesome
Download links are dead.
Try now. Just updated them.