Still working on renders for now. Going to take some time though as I'm waiting on surgery for acute pain that's preventing me from working quicker. Should be better after next week. Thank you very much for your support. I'll keep you posted.
Thanks for the offer, mate. I'm in good hands at the moment. Got some great pain management at the moment to tie me over till the surgery next Thursday, after which they'll fix what hasn't healed from the previous rectal surgery.
this game is a gem amongs many others, i look forward to supporting you in the future, may i ask do you have a patreon or some other way for us to support you ?
Thanks for your support mate. I decided not to have a patreon as this is purely a passion project of mine. If you do feel a need to contribute, a simple donation or server boost in Discord will suffice. Once again thanks for your support.
I agree with a poster below. Would have appreciated not seeing the mc face. the mc face being visable or their whole person tends to take away from the immersion. my only real critique. otherwise, i enjoyed the game.
Thanks for the feedback Rocky. I simply wanted to go in a different direction with the MC being shown. There's more content being developed so hopefully should have it ready for you by early January
I just finished v0.5 and I'd like to give a personal feedback; no criticisms, just opinions and wishes.
Firstly, I undestand the similarity with MNF, unfortunately even with the same 'jap' characters' graphic; I would avoid to show MC ugly face if possible.
Second, more important; personally I'l really like to have intercourses among the women/girls. Having 4 hot ladies in the same bed should lead to some actions among them, and this also for Susan-Liz-Marion (as it happens in MNF), maybe even with the Grandmother (I don't recall the name now). Some (inxest) lesbianism is wellcome.
Third: please do no expand to much the NCPs; this will confuse and disperse the story. You already have 7 women, at least, to play with.
Four: since I am a watersport lover, I'd love to see some content with this fetish; MNF has a real minimunm (too little unfortunately) content,
One last think about the plot: I do not understand Marion generosity in giving such a big and nice house to Liz (which is the relationship with Marion?) instead of give that to Susan that have now 4 other people to host.
Said all this, thanks for your commitment and my very best wishes for the next future
Thanks for your feedback. I included MC's face to add more depth to the experience. MNF was the main inspiration for this. That's why the story's similar. There will be interactions between the girls later on while MC's busy. Haven't planned much after that at this point, but I will take your advice and keep it in mind. I'm personally not a big fan of watersports (golden showers), but I reckon I'll be able to include some form of female ejaculation at some point.
As far as Marion is concerned, the reason for her generosity is due to a connection she has between her & Susan that both Susan & MC haven't discovered yet. More to come on that.
I just found this gem of a visual novel and it is awesome. Above my expectations and I would say excellent work. I hope you get well and continue to shower us with your excellence. Thanks for all your hard work. :)
No timetable at this stage due to failing health. At this point working on synopsis for 0.6 so trying to get more content out as soon as I possibly can.
Already liking this one better than MNF, and would be more interested to see where this one goes.
Beth needs a lot of polishing. She is literally non-existant after her introduction outside of token appearances in the background from where she has no further input or dialogue up until she is basically handed to the MC. She is effectively overlooked for a significant portion of the game.
There are also several mismatched names, Beth will sometimes be referred to as Bree and Kirsty sometimes will be referenced as Kylie.
I started up the 0.5 update with a new game and it displays the wrong pictures/characters for the mom and stuff in the opening in the game before you me the lady at the trainstatio
Do you know "My New Family" created by Killer7? Cause the more i play (or read cause no choices), the more see this as plagiarism. 90%+ are stuff i saw while playing MNF.
Yes, MNF gave me inspiration for the VN as the start of the story drew similarities with my own experiences as an adoptee. Not to take anything away from Killer7's efforts. I wanted to put my own spin on it, but have the character interactions and their relationships evolve differently. But the main aim here is not to drag the story out too much and to avoid unnecessary repetiveness with certain content. After all, we're all after a feel-good story from time to time to keep our spirits up, especially after what's been going on globally the past 2 yrs.
Please accept this hug off Kylie as a thankyou for your support.
The fact you don't give player an option to refuse sex scenes is a big minus, I would have rather decline Marion. Few times both Marion and MC refers Susan as landlady instead of mother, which isn't bid deal, just need proofreading I guess. Also I really doubt that Kylie would open up to MC about her issues first day they meet, prob would have better to let her open up bit by bit over time while getting closer.
All in all not a bad experience, could be better but could have been a lot worse too so keep on rolling =).
Also it was bit confusing with chapter labels, this has 3 chapters since the prologue is labeled as chapter 1.
Thanks for the feedback. I will take that all on board. All typos have already been fixed, and there will be decisions added in later on. We're still early WIP. Oh, and Kylie's story will be going further in depth. Just getting some simple facts cleared up first.
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Hope you and yours are safe and enjoying these holidays.
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We are thank you. Same goes to you as well. Happy Holidays.
Give us a date please waiting for the update really badly..
Still working on renders for now. Going to take some time though as I'm waiting on surgery for acute pain that's preventing me from working quicker. Should be better after next week. Thank you very much for your support. I'll keep you posted.
Thanks for the offer, mate. I'm in good hands at the moment. Got some great pain management at the moment to tie me over till the surgery next Thursday, after which they'll fix what hasn't healed from the previous rectal surgery.
Best wishes for you❤️
One of the best story line..❤️❤️❤️ add more women and harem please
Can't wait for the next update please add more content and release it soon..
this game is a gem amongs many others, i look forward to supporting you in the future, may i ask do you have a patreon or some other way for us to support you ?
Thanks for your support mate. I decided not to have a patreon as this is purely a passion project of mine. If you do feel a need to contribute, a simple donation or server boost in Discord will suffice. Once again thanks for your support.
I agree with a poster below. Would have appreciated not seeing the mc face. the mc face being visable or their whole person tends to take away from the immersion. my only real critique. otherwise, i enjoyed the game.
Thanks for the feedback Rocky. I simply wanted to go in a different direction with the MC being shown. There's more content being developed so hopefully should have it ready for you by early January
I just finished v0.5 and I'd like to give a personal feedback; no criticisms, just opinions and wishes.
Firstly, I undestand the similarity with MNF, unfortunately even with the same 'jap' characters' graphic; I would avoid to show MC ugly face if possible.
Second, more important; personally I'l really like to have intercourses among the women/girls. Having 4 hot ladies in the same bed should lead to some actions among them, and this also for Susan-Liz-Marion (as it happens in MNF), maybe even with the Grandmother (I don't recall the name now). Some (inxest) lesbianism is wellcome.
Third: please do no expand to much the NCPs; this will confuse and disperse the story. You already have 7 women, at least, to play with.
Four: since I am a watersport lover, I'd love to see some content with this fetish; MNF has a real minimunm (too little unfortunately) content,
One last think about the plot: I do not understand Marion generosity in giving such a big and nice house to Liz (which is the relationship with Marion?) instead of give that to Susan that have now 4 other people to host.
Said all this, thanks for your commitment and my very best wishes for the next future
Thanks for your feedback. I included MC's face to add more depth to the experience. MNF was the main inspiration for this. That's why the story's similar. There will be interactions between the girls later on while MC's busy. Haven't planned much after that at this point, but I will take your advice and keep it in mind. I'm personally not a big fan of watersports (golden showers), but I reckon I'll be able to include some form of female ejaculation at some point.
As far as Marion is concerned, the reason for her generosity is due to a connection she has between her & Susan that both Susan & MC haven't discovered yet. More to come on that.
Once again, thank you for your support. Cheers.
I just found this gem of a visual novel and it is awesome. Above my expectations and I would say excellent work. I hope you get well and continue to shower us with your excellence. Thanks for all your hard work. :)
Thanks for your kind words Stormthump. I will endeavour to keep producing more of this fine content for you to enjoy.
Looking Forward to 0.6 any timetable planned or does it come out when ready?
No timetable at this stage due to failing health. At this point working on synopsis for 0.6 so trying to get more content out as soon as I possibly can.
Ok get well First game development is second hand love the game FYI
Thank you.
please don't put ntr content it would spoil the game
No NTR planned at all. Don't worry
Already liking this one better than MNF, and would be more interested to see where this one goes.
Beth needs a lot of polishing. She is literally non-existant after her introduction outside of token appearances in the background from where she has no further input or dialogue up until she is basically handed to the MC. She is effectively overlooked for a significant portion of the game.
There are also several mismatched names, Beth will sometimes be referred to as Bree and Kirsty sometimes will be referenced as Kylie.
Beth will have more content incoming, I can assure you. As far as those errors you mentioned are concerned, they have already been addressed.
I thank you for your feedback and support, and look forward to bringing you more exciting content.
I started up the 0.5 update with a new game and it displays the wrong pictures/characters for the mom and stuff in the opening in the game before you me the lady at the trainstatio
The "younger" pic of Mom is how MC remembers her before the car crash. I decided to change it to add realism to the story.
that makes sense. I was super confused. Thanks for the clarification.
You're most welcome. Hope you enjoy the content, there's more to come...
Do you know "My New Family" created by Killer7? Cause the more i play (or read cause no choices), the more see this as plagiarism. 90%+ are stuff i saw while playing MNF.
My New Family was the main inspiration for this. I merely wanted to put my own spin on what's a fantastic story by Killer7. No plaguerism intended.
Do you have a patreon
Don't have one as I'm not that desperate for funding. Just happy to produce something for everyone to enjoy
When i start the game on joiplay is show me multiple scripts error
Can we have a roommate-patch? I want to be able to contract a stray cat!
Sorry to disappoint. No 'little cats' to be found here..
What are all the fetish tags planned? Will it have pregnancy (cross fingers)?
Looking at it. Just thinking about where to put it in the timeline.
Have you decided about where to put impreg?
There's one announced already in 0.9
So, basically your take on "My New Family" by Killer7?
Yes, MNF gave me inspiration for the VN as the start of the story drew similarities with my own experiences as an adoptee. Not to take anything away from Killer7's efforts. I wanted to put my own spin on it, but have the character interactions and their relationships evolve differently. But the main aim here is not to drag the story out too much and to avoid unnecessary repetiveness with certain content. After all, we're all after a feel-good story from time to time to keep our spirits up, especially after what's been going on globally the past 2 yrs.
Please accept this hug off Kylie as a thankyou for your support.
The fact you don't give player an option to refuse sex scenes is a big minus, I would have rather decline Marion. Few times both Marion and MC refers Susan as landlady instead of mother, which isn't bid deal, just need proofreading I guess. Also I really doubt that Kylie would open up to MC about her issues first day they meet, prob would have better to let her open up bit by bit over time while getting closer.
All in all not a bad experience, could be better but could have been a lot worse too so keep on rolling =).
Also it was bit confusing with chapter labels, this has 3 chapters since the prologue is labeled as chapter 1.
Thanks for the feedback. I will take that all on board. All typos have already been fixed, and there will be decisions added in later on. We're still early WIP. Oh, and Kylie's story will be going further in depth. Just getting some simple facts cleared up first.
on my phone it keeps crashing every few minutes it might just be my phone but thought u would like to know
Thanks for the feedback. Images may need to be compressed. Will look into it.
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is there plans for a android version
There are. Tried to port to Android with 0.1 but was unable to for some reason. Will try again with 0.2 only being a day away or so.
oh ok thats awesome
Download links are dead.
Try now. Just updated them.